Que mona que sexy que kawaii ^^...
Regalame ese bañador XD!...

me alegra que me hicieras caso con la pelota XDDD...

Al final el esfuerzo ha merecido la pena,te ha quedao chulísimo ^^...Sólo te ha faltado ponerle sombra de ojos,que ayame siempre lleva o roja o lila XD

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Heheh. No, I'm bad at coloring...

Well, if you ask me, I think your coloring works very well for the piece, however, it seems flat. If you don't want flat colors, you can try adding some volume by applying darker shades of color and lighter shades for highlights. Because Ayame will have increased contrast, this will help her pop out more instead of competing for detail from that water background. Hope this helps.

I especially like the line work. Did you draw on large sheets of paper to get your lines that thin?

Good luck in the contest (^-^)!

Holy cow! Bad at coloring?? Then I should quit before trying, my friend; this piece is really nice colored IMO. Specially the hair, and the skin looks soft and smooth. Well done!

My only complaint is that you hided her legs. Legs could have been a great add for a complete beach-bikini-sexygirl drawing

Asiaas ^^ No te regalo el bañador porque solo existe en mis fantasías xDDD
Lo del onigiri-pelota era buena idea ^^

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Thanks for the advice ^^ I'll try in my next colouring. Well, somehow I tried in this one too, but in the end I simplified the colors again (not satisfied). Volume is difficult xD

The lineart was made in a DinA4 paper, and then redrawn in Photoshop.

Thanks again ^^

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Well, I'm not very satisfied with the coloring, but I haven't colour in PC since last Ice Age xDD
It wasn't my intention to hide her legs, but I ran out of paper and the drawing stops there xD I could draw her legs completely in pc, but I'm so lazy... maybe next time

Thanks for the comment, and the cheering ^^

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Tru, volume is difficult, but you can only master it through practice!

I see. I've tried redrawing line art on Photoshop in the past, but it just looks really weird, heheh. Maybe I should use the pen tool...

No prob, glad I could help.

You are welcome

I like the rice beach ball and she looks really nice in that outfit it would be a great secret costume in a game.

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